Case Studies
Every client has different needs. I adapt my feedback and approach to suit your individual preferences, with the objective of helping you put your best foot forward.
College Admission
Opportunity
High school student (he/him) seeking admission to Ivy League University.
Process
I reviewed six essays and an activities list summarizing accomplishments and awards, providing comprehensive feedback on how to paint a coherent and compelling application.
Outcome
The student gained admission to his Ivy of choice and is currently thriving as an undergraduate.
I left general feedback on the essay as a whole, including how well it tied together with other essays in the application. Additionally, I left specific feedback on content, voice and tone to help the student streamline and strengthen his writing.
Job Application
Opportunity
Seasoned job applicant (she/her) looking to apply to senior-level data analyst position.
Process
I reviewed 3 drafts of her cover letter and helped her finesse her first paragraph to be more eye-catching and impactful.
Outcome
The applicant was invited to an interview and offered a role paying $90,000.
I helped the job applicant clarify her opening paragraph to showcase both her skills and fit for the job.
Graduate Fellowship
Opportunity
MBA student (she/her) looking to land a highly selective (10 recipients only) travel and study opportunity to Europe.
Process
I reviewed all four essays in her application and provided holistic and specific feedback to help her more effectively tie her personal experiences to her broader professional goals.
Outcome
The student won the scholarship and completed an enriching learning experience in Europe.
I left thoughtful and strategic feedback to fine-tune and amplify the writer’s voice.
Language Learning
Opportunity
Lawyer (she/her) looking to attain basic proficiency for a two-week vacation to Mexico.
Outcome
The student was able to communicate at a basic level in Mexico, leading to an improvement in her skills and increased confidence.
I prepared content on language and grammar concepts and helped the student practice through quizzes, role-play, dialogues, and other activities.
Process
I crafted a curriculum to match the student’s learning goals. Units included passing customs at the airport, navigating the city, talking about life and the past, and practicing negotiation at the market.
